DEDICATED to the CROWNING RESIDUAL: To the HOPE, the PRIDE and the DETERMINATION that Somehow Survived Infancy, Adolescence and Adulthood to Burn Hot and Bright Within the HEARTS of the SEASONED SENIORITY.
Hi Jay: I like your poem. You draw us in and then twist it with you being the one
who fell. CLEVER! I’m in my daughter’s tree house bedroom studying character
tips on “Future Learn” site. It is raining in Minnesota. This means that the farmers
can’t harvest their soybeans and I am not walking my dogs. I am trying to become
a better writer and I appreciate your writing, Jay. Enjoy! nancy
You prove again your love affair with Twitter is for real, squeezing out all the pith! Love it! (Sent this before but don’t think it went through.) NOTE: did I go over 140 characters? NOT INClUDING THE NOTE!!!
Hi Jay: I like your poem. You draw us in and then twist it with you being the one
who fell. CLEVER! I’m in my daughter’s tree house bedroom studying character
tips on “Future Learn” site. It is raining in Minnesota. This means that the farmers
can’t harvest their soybeans and I am not walking my dogs. I am trying to become
a better writer and I appreciate your writing, Jay. Enjoy! nancy
You are a gem, Nancy. Thank you for dropping by and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. Good luck on your writing studies.
Jay
You prove again your love affair with Twitter is for real, squeezing out all the pith! Love it! (Sent this before but don’t think it went through.) NOTE: did I go over 140 characters? NOT INClUDING THE NOTE!!!
OUCH
Hi, Jay,
Your getting downright poetic, my friend. I really like this one. Your not only one of the best writers I now, but a poet and garden. too!
~Debbie
Me, too!!!